Poetry – another attempt

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I realised it is April, poetry month, and it is nearly over

Dreaming

Togetherness,

holding hands,

looking into your eyes,

walking in the moonlight together,kiss

counting the stars,

being close,

touching softly,

kissing gently,

passion ignites,

wow

to be in your arms,

feeling them around me,

don’t let go,

touching your face,

trace your lips,

kiss you softly,

feel your hands on me,

kiss you greedyly,

enjoy your touch,

be close to your body,

pleasure, bliss,

and enjoy the oneness.

50 responses »

  1. It evokes the passion and tenderness of lovers on a romantic night. I enjoyed it, Ute. It isn’t an attempt at poetry. It is a poem. Which makes you a poet, my friend.

    May you find much joy in helping readers to experience a feast of exquisite feelings and be so touched by your words that they become an indelible part of their–of our–lives.

    May your words continue to help people to feel more connected to their own spirits and to those all around them, as you make a positive difference to ever-growing numbers of people around the world.

    I believe you will find that many thirst for the unique nectar of the radiantly beautiful flower of your spirit.

    Russ

    • Russ, I don’t know what to say to your lovely , wonderful comment. A thank you is not enough! I have tears in my eyes.
      Thank you for such wonderful words, fantastic to read in the morning , they make my day!
      With love
      UTe

      • Your message touched me and brightened my day, Ute. As your posts and comments often do. Thank you for being in my life.
        With love,
        Russ

  2. I love this. It’s passionate with out being pornographic, it is sensual with slight sexual. It is two lovers ending their day in shared bliss.

    Love it Ute

  3. I don’t know Ute. The things you get me to do. A congratulations key on my laptop for all your awards and NOW I have to go and take a cold shower πŸ˜‰ Ralph xox πŸ˜€

  4. oooo la la. Wow, whatever you’ve got over there in England, I’d like a drink of it over here in CA. Mmmm I can just imagine it. Actually V is pretty good at it, but the words to describe it neither of us have. I think I’ll just treasure up yours. All I can say is Yummy!

    BTW, awards are still out there. When you next visit my site check out http://wp.me/p2jC53-1ot for your blog. This is my way of saying that you are a special blogging friend. Feel free to do with it what you will – no rush – no pressure. The world won’t collapse if you do nothing, nor will I. I just wanted to say, “Thanks for being a good friend.” πŸ™‚ Marsha πŸ™‚ You are a special blogging friend, Ute! May your dreams come true! πŸ™‚

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