Apr30

Poetry – another attempt

Posted on April 30, 2013 by utesmile

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I realised it is April, poetry month, and it is nearly over

Dreaming

Togetherness,

holding hands,

looking into your eyes,

walking in the moonlight together,

counting the stars,

being close,

touching softly,

kissing gently,

passion ignites,

wow

to be in your arms,

feeling them around me,

don’t let go,

touching your face,

trace your lips,

kiss you softly,

feel your hands on me,

kiss you greedyly,

enjoy your touch,

be close to your body,

pleasure, bliss,

and enjoy the oneness.

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Sonel on April 30, 2013 at 6:27 am said:

Beautiful…… 🙂

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- utesmile on April 30, 2013 at 6:32 am said:
  
  Thank you Sophia! 🙂
  
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  - Sonel on April 30, 2013 at 6:35 am said:
    
    You’re welcome hon. 🙂
soumyav on April 30, 2013 at 6:39 am said:

lovely!

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- utesmile on April 30, 2013 at 6:40 am said:
  
  Thank you so much ! 🙂
  
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russtowne on April 30, 2013 at 6:55 am said:

It evokes the passion and tenderness of lovers on a romantic night. I enjoyed it, Ute. It isn’t an attempt at poetry. It is a poem. Which makes you a poet, my friend.

May you find much joy in helping readers to experience a feast of exquisite feelings and be so touched by your words that they become an indelible part of their–of our–lives.

May your words continue to help people to feel more connected to their own spirits and to those all around them, as you make a positive difference to ever-growing numbers of people around the world.

I believe you will find that many thirst for the unique nectar of the radiantly beautiful flower of your spirit.

Russ

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- utesmile on April 30, 2013 at 7:04 am said:
  
  Russ, I don’t know what to say to your lovely , wonderful comment. A thank you is not enough! I have tears in my eyes.
  Thank you for such wonderful words, fantastic to read in the morning , they make my day!
  With love
  UTe
  
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  - russtowne on April 30, 2013 at 8:14 pm said:
    
    Your message touched me and brightened my day, Ute. As your posts and comments often do. Thank you for being in my life.
    With love,
    Russ
Alastair on April 30, 2013 at 8:22 am said:

I love this. It’s passionate with out being pornographic, it is sensual with slight sexual. It is two lovers ending their day in shared bliss.

Love it Ute

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- utesmile on April 30, 2013 at 5:41 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much Alastair, I wasn’t sure about it and left it to the last day to post! It means a lot to me that you love it as you are such great poet! 🙂
  
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  - Alastair on April 30, 2013 at 6:21 pm said:
    
    😆 Thank you but I am not a great poet. My poetry is just okay. The way you did this, I could never do anything as brilliant as this.
  - utesmile on April 30, 2013 at 7:06 pm said:
    
    Isn’t it funny how we think the other one’s is better. Let’s say we are both okay, no actually we are both brilliant… 😀 I do thnak you so much for your compliment.
  - Alastair on April 30, 2013 at 7:07 pm said:
    
    You’re welcome
1girl4adamwest on April 30, 2013 at 9:01 am said:

Sexy beautiful!!!

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- utesmile on April 30, 2013 at 5:42 pm said:
  
  Glad you like it! 🙂
  
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lizzierosejewellery on April 30, 2013 at 10:16 am said:

Very sensuous, where did you get the inspiration from? Or can’t you say? 🙂

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- utesmile on April 30, 2013 at 5:46 pm said:
  
  Thank you Lizzie, hmm, it is in my dream, and as I am dating at the moment…. I have dreams…… 🙂 ( as it says…. one day my prince will come….mine took a wrong turn, got lost and is too stubborn to ask for directions) 🙂
  
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  - lizzierosejewellery on May 1, 2013 at 1:17 am said:
    
    Haha! Great quote! Why don’t you buy him a GPS?
  - utesmile on May 1, 2013 at 5:50 am said:
    
    Oh great idea! 🙂
Carl D'Agostino on April 30, 2013 at 10:37 am said:

So’s how’s this counting the stars thing workin’ out for you ? See any windmills ?

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- utesmile on April 30, 2013 at 5:47 pm said:
  
  I find counting stars together very romantic….. never done it with someone but I’d love to! 🙂
  
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sspjlife56 on April 30, 2013 at 2:29 pm said:

very very nice Ute!!!

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- utesmile on April 30, 2013 at 5:48 pm said:
  
  Thank you my friend! 🙂
  
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catnipoflife on April 30, 2013 at 3:15 pm said:

Well said, Ute! 🙂

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- utesmile on April 30, 2013 at 5:48 pm said:
  
  Thanks so much Sharla! 🙂
  
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Ralph on April 30, 2013 at 7:18 pm said:

I don’t know Ute. The things you get me to do. A congratulations key on my laptop for all your awards and NOW I have to go and take a cold shower 😉 Ralph xox 😀

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- utesmile on April 30, 2013 at 7:20 pm said:
  
  Ralph, you just had a post on pure love…. I got a bit more physical…that is all….. 🙂
  
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  - Ralph on April 30, 2013 at 8:05 pm said:
    
    Brilliant. Well done Ute 😀
ltpen315,barb on April 30, 2013 at 8:34 pm said:

So beautiful!!

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- utesmile on April 30, 2013 at 8:40 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much! 🙂
  
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LuAnn on April 30, 2013 at 11:09 pm said:

In a word Ute…passionate! 🙂

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- utesmile on May 1, 2013 at 5:49 am said:
  
  Yes indeed…. 🙂 thank you
  
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RoSy on May 1, 2013 at 1:38 am said:

Oh Ute! Your poetry is bringing up the temps now. Bye, bye winter 😉

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- utesmile on May 1, 2013 at 5:54 am said:
  
  RoSy yes we need it “hotter”…. 🙂
  
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Strawberryindigo on May 1, 2013 at 4:28 am said:

Beautiful and sensual.

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- utesmile on May 1, 2013 at 6:07 pm said:
  
  Thank you very much ! xx
  
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tchistorygal on May 1, 2013 at 6:20 am said:

oooo la la. Wow, whatever you’ve got over there in England, I’d like a drink of it over here in CA. Mmmm I can just imagine it. Actually V is pretty good at it, but the words to describe it neither of us have. I think I’ll just treasure up yours. All I can say is Yummy!

BTW, awards are still out there. When you next visit my site check out http://wp.me/p2jC53-1ot for your blog. This is my way of saying that you are a special blogging friend. Feel free to do with it what you will – no rush – no pressure. The world won’t collapse if you do nothing, nor will I. I just wanted to say, “Thanks for being a good friend.” 🙂 Marsha 🙂 You are a special blogging friend, Ute! May your dreams come true! 🙂

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- utesmile on May 1, 2013 at 6:10 pm said:
  
  Marsha, thank you so much, I am a bit behind with things, but I will get to it. I do appreciate your lovely words so much, and I can only give the compliment back, that you are a wonderful blogger friend to me. Thank you so much saying it in this nice way! With love from Ute x
  
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  - tchistorygal on May 1, 2013 at 10:05 pm said:
    
    I now know a real Poet! 😃
  - utesmile on May 2, 2013 at 6:42 am said:
    
    You made my day! huge thank you my friend! Love Ute
  - tchistorygal on May 2, 2013 at 5:06 pm said:
    
    🙂
adinparadise on May 1, 2013 at 6:32 pm said:

Love this, Ute. Very sensuous writing. 🙂

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- utesmile on May 1, 2013 at 7:10 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it!
  
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eternalcadence on May 2, 2013 at 2:39 pm said:

great work ute…really love your words…. 🙂 keep it up 🙂

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- utesmile on May 2, 2013 at 4:42 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much ! I appreciate your comment and you visiting me! With love Ute
  
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photonatureblog on May 3, 2013 at 10:34 pm said:

Wow, your prince will be a lucky man. Beautifully expressed feelings and passion 😉

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- utesmile on May 4, 2013 at 7:09 am said:
  
  Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Really appreciate it!
  
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vivozhouphotography on May 8, 2013 at 6:17 am said:

Induces much feeling!

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- utesmile on May 8, 2013 at 6:58 pm said:
  
  Thank you for visiting my blog, I appreciate that! Yes there is much feeling in it….. 🙂
  
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